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Friday, October 22, 2021

Wondrous Writing

Kia Ora,

Welcome back to my blog. This week in writing we have been learning about explanation writing and our goal is: Support ideas with detail, use some complex sentences to create pace, flow and interest, support ideas with detail, write content relevant to the task. We got to chose a topic to write about and I chose How to take care of a dog. Here is my work. I hope you enjoy reading it.


How to take Care of a Dog


Woof woof bark bark, These are just some of the little noises that come from our man’s best friend, a dog!! We all love dogs but not everyone knows how to take care of a dog and that is what I am here to tell you . 


Dog Food

Dog food I think that you should by nood, it is a brand of dog food and if your dog doesn’t like it then they will give you a refund. You should give your dog 1 scoop if they are a bit round, if they are skinny then I’d say 1 and a half scoops. Hope your dog likes their life in the nood. (no pun intended)


Exercise

In my opinion I think 3 walks a week would be great and it should be 10 - 20 minutes long. When walking your dog you should buy a harness because when you have a collar they could be running and when you stop them they will get choked in the throat. But with a harness it won’t choke them. But they can wear one in and around the house.


Conclusion


In conclusion I think that when adopting or buying a dog you, should think of all of the important things that I have told you in this speech. I hope your dog is as cute as mine.

 ( JK no dog is cuter than MY dog DOUG )


Whats your favorite breed of dog


2 comments:

  1. Kia ora kamryn
    I love how you have put so much effort into your work it shows that you really care about your dog. I love border collies. They are a very smart dog breed and they are great to run with. Make sure next time you add a question mark. What is your favourite dog breed?
    -Sophie

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  2. Dear Kamryn
    I love your blog! My favourite dog breed is Labradors ( Chocolate ). Next time I think you need to make it longer. What is your dogs name? ps my dog is waaaaaaaaaaay cuter than yours
    From Sophie M

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